*First line borrowed from the last line of “Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening” by Robert Frost
Siren Song
And miles to go before I sleep
the sun has reached my reddened eyes
these lines I write yet haven’t reached
the siren song that stirs inside
These small hours I will steal
the verse caught in the undertow
stretching out my hands to feel
a melody I am yet to know
You managed to make it rhyme and kept a rhythm without it feeling forced. Really nicely done! Also, I like how every single line built up this feeling of dread in me.