Lonely Star
Way back when
you played that song for me
your strong fingertips
doing a box step
between the frets
a dance routine in miniature
I watched the swell
of the muscles in your forearm
at the effort and the art
of vibrating air
You didn’t speak
you didn’t have to
I was eavesdropping—
listening in
on the truth of you
in the pitching of your weight
as you played
like a seabird teetering
in a strong wind
in the fold of your brow
as you summoned
a daydream
distant and shining
You didn’t speak—
I wish you would
Show me yours
hold your light up to mine
I could snack on these crumbs
and eat your stolen secrets
but I’d rather be fed
at the table of your dreaming
and the night sky is best viewed
through the eye
of some dove-hearted dreamer
Lonely star,
drop the act
I really enjoyed this poem. I actually don’t think you need the last stanza: you might want to consider using the ‘real estate’ of the title to pack that thought in: “Lonely star, drop the act.” But that is me, because I liked ending on the hope of the narrator’s final point. The snack/fed device in the penultimate (ultimate?) stanza was delectable. Thanks for writing and sharing.