Moonlight shimmered
On sweat across her
Breastbone that
Rose and fell with
The wind’s breath
Flitting along the lake
Under a netted canopy
Sprinkled with stars that
Sparkled across the
Gleam of her teeth and
Glisten of her eyes as I
Beheld her glory in this
Shimmered moonlight.
This is so beautiful! I love the repetition of the consonant sounds in the second stanza, and your use of the senses is a job well done! 🙂
🙊 TYSM