Words bursting in , brown thick mud
Slow , deadly swamp he was , all right
Signboards neglected , warnings disdain
Jumped on she right into brewing up muck
Gasped for air , thrashed up arms
Came no help , for she was
the rude little rebel
Shocked was the mob as she smiled on , bright girl ,
Mud brimmed her lips and she blurted out words :
“He is the swamp , oh yeah , and i am his mud
Drown , i should , for he craves me
And i am his breath
For neither should exist while the other survives”
Wonderful use of metaphor.
We know these people even though they are not strictly presented as people.
THANKS … Im really happy that you went through my poem .
‘the suffocating and drowning of relationshiops