she came to me from my parents
the little blue dog that hunted for clues.
but she was too curious
and I too careless
she found a can of olives on the Win-Dixie shelves
and thought it would make a good spot to rest
she was lost for some hours,
but my father brought her home
after an arduous search
from then on, I kept her close by
but proximity doesn’t always mean safe
like the time I spilled glue on one paw then
tore the seam on the other, and
I thought she was a goner
but my mother patched her up
and she was almost as good as new
after many a year, and many a move,
she still sits on my selves,
still a good spot to rest
but far away from olives, and glue,
and any other duress
Wonderfully well communicated, and paced. Terrific.
I started reading this thinking she was alive and had to re-read to find where I went astray. Did you intend to have the reader think she was alive? If so. I wonder why.