Open air and closed eyes.
Soft breeze through hair
like a gentle lover.
Lapping waves and ocean spray cools
where sun beats down.
Smell of salt and algae;
anywhere else a sign of rot,
but here, freedom
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Open air and closed eyes.
Soft breeze through hair
like a gentle lover.
Lapping waves and ocean spray cools
where sun beats down.
Smell of salt and algae;
anywhere else a sign of rot,
but here, freedom
You’ve created a gently, relaxed and nuanced poem which draw us completely into your ocean bliss (and freedom!). Beautiful!
Thank you!
Thank you!
Really liked this poem. I love the ocean and being on the water. Been out on all types of boats. I can feel it again through your poem