I heard tale of a girl who became disillusioned with her life
Her mother says it was school
Her teachers say it was her home
Her friends say it was something else entirely
They say she found a secret garden filled with all the flowers in the world
She’d visit after school, making the garden her own
She told them the flowers were special, that instead of water they needed secrets
And secrets she gave them
Every day after school she stayed for hours, talking to those flowers
Giving them every secret she could thing of
In return they listened and listened and listened
And grew and grew and grew
Until one day she returned empty-handed, all her secrets spilled
The flowers shouted and shouted and shouted
They shouted every secret back at her in one deafening burst
Filling her head with every secret every girl had ever told them
Now her mother and her teachers say she ran away from home
But her friends – they say she became a flower that day in the secret garden
Waiting and listening for secrets
This is lovely, like a modern fairy tale. I could see it being developed into a full story.
Thank you!
Lovely – thanks 🙂
Thanks! 🙂
love it, beautiful definitely would make a brilliant illustrated story,
I agree – power story-telling in this piece!