An unnatural Haiku about Tech Babble- Prompt #5 Posted on August 13, 2016 1:11pm EDTAugust 13, 2016 6:06pm EDT by Ingrid Your technobable Leaves me unnaturally Disconnected. Ingrid Exner, 2016.
Thanks Joyce 🙂 I just realized tho that my last line is four syllables instead of five…I wrote this late at night and I think that I slur in my head…therefore counted five syllables instead of four…is disconnectedly a word-lol? 🙂 Reply
I quite like this haiku, Ingrid. Short but conveys an emotional punch that’s easy to relate to. Good work! Reply
Very nice, Ingrid – few words with a depth of meaning.
Thank you Vijaya!
I love this one! Direct and to the point.
Thanks Joyce 🙂 I just realized tho that my last line is four syllables instead of five…I wrote this late at night and I think that I slur in my head…therefore counted five syllables instead of four…is disconnectedly a word-lol? 🙂
I quite like this haiku, Ingrid. Short but conveys an emotional punch that’s easy to relate to. Good work!