6 thoughts on “5th hour – I see you (Text prompt)”

1. Short and beautiful stunning poem

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   1. 🙂🙏

2. This is beautiful. I love the phrasing and flow of words, as well as the simple repetition of “I see you” – it works well given the sentiment of the poem. This would have worked well for the “tenderness prompt too!

   Have you thought of separating the first line into three? Perhaps it was meant to be – the formatting can go wonky sometimes. 🙂

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   1. Thank you! I will consider your edits too. That wonkiness be a fact Thanks again!!! 🤗

3. This is another beautiful poem, and the call back to the line ‘I see you’ from your Hour 1 poem carries your voice so strongly throughout each of your poems.

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   1. Thanks Darren. I eclectically appreciate your appreciation. 🙏🙏✨️