Flowers from branches above
murmur that one melody from
so long ago, their time before.
It sings now on the wind,
tones in minors yet so powerful.
Impetuous and wild-eyed while
pining and planning for excitement
the world over,
she saw his gentle smile and stopped
suddenly still in the madcap, open world.
He’d been to the world, called out in return when
he needed to serve and every night saw
home grow more focused in his wizened eyes, and
her boundless energy took ever more colors
with each dream.
Their first dances were on busses with
transistor radios, church galas with
crepe paper decorations, jazz dives with
grizzled poets scribbling to notes played
while the two swayed everywhere, anywhere,
each day they had together.
The songs play now in improvised notes,
a phrase wafting in on the breeze in harmony
with the rustles from above.
A lifetime of holding each other gently,
a tender blessing to each other,
they sit together and envision their next adventure
while their hearts dance in bliss.
A nice use of seeing something that triggers memories and brings your memories into the present, while using images to create movement.
Thank you, Dave. When I revise this, I’ll keep this in mind. I’m looking forward to reading more poems, so which of yours makes you proudest – or which would do you wish had more commentary?
I loved the harmony of this poem in the rhythm of the lines and the words brought vivid and clear images to mind. Love these lines:
‘jazz dives with
grizzled poets scribbling to notes played’
A perfect love story!
Literally travelling through time along with the melodies of togetherness…love has no regrets, no complaints…that sums up this amazing poem