Crawdads.
Nawlins.
Crawdads in Nawlins.
‘No one even says that here,” she says
having been here many times
dancing along the French Quarter
eating red beans and rice
coming in and going out on the Ponchartrain
‘You sound like another tourist,’ she wails
while we are in Nawlins
and I’m squeezing through the crowds
her hand in mine
‘A target, people will hurt us’
they might
they might hurt us in Nawlins
but I am inclined to believe
as the waitress puts down a high pile of crawfish
that I rip apart with poor technique
to her side-eye from the corner
while my girlfriend eats a po’ boy
backed up from the table
because the juice is going everywhere
that they won’t hurt us
they won’t hurt us in Nawlins.
LOVE this!!!!! I just returned from Nawlins, and you captured a mood within a mood. A reflection of otherness and a playful nod to a universal fear – Well done!
I used to live in New Orleans, so I can really relate to this vivid poem.