Wake Me Up Before You Go
Heat radiates from your body
I caress the soft curves of your porcelain skin
You make my heart quicken with desire
I’m mesmerized by the fullness of your body
Your aroma exhilarates my senses
My lips caress your curves eagerly
Anticipation of our ecstasy is unbearable
I embrace you just to feel your touch
I promise to never let you go
I drink in your loveliness
I whisper your name softly…
Coffee
This one got me sooo good! HAHAHAHA! Love the game this poem played and the way, even though I was not thinking about coffee, reading the word coffee just fit so perfectly there at the end. Brilliant!
Ah ha! Great thoughts! This drew me in and I was starting to feel like a voyeur, but I kept right on going! I’m a coffee lover, too!
So intimate and sensual
Great job!
I love this! It is ingenious how well you draw your reader in to your world of sensual delights and then wink at them with your subtle ending. Brilliant!