Hot sun
Gentle breeze
sweet smell of summer.
Loud buzz
Sharp sting
Biting bugs of summer
Generous smiles
Open laughter
Hot boys of summer
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Hot sun
Gentle breeze
sweet smell of summer.
Loud buzz
Sharp sting
Biting bugs of summer
Generous smiles
Open laughter
Hot boys of summer
I just went out in the yard to get a photo of my trees overhead and was immediately bitten by a bug. Your poem gives a picture of summers past and present. Especially like the way you go from short picture to short picture ending with the smiling boys.