lie awake in the misty morning
and time is
a fast flowing stream
sounding the alarm
too quickly.
lie awake in the quiet of midnight
and time is
a thick muddy swamp
oozing with danger
and disappointment.
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
lie awake in the misty morning
and time is
a fast flowing stream
sounding the alarm
too quickly.
lie awake in the quiet of midnight
and time is
a thick muddy swamp
oozing with danger
and disappointment.
Oh the description/metaphor is awesome in this. I also like short line poems. They feel more sharp or quick.
Thank you!