The two cellos played
together, music foretold
their detours managed.
The two cellos spoke
with the soothe of melody
some variation
Husband and wife share,
their story tells of living —
not all unity.
Life, so like music,
ahhhhhh, sometimes, sweetly in sync,
other times on hold.
By Nancy Ann Smith, Poetry Marathon #3, June 25, 2022
This is awesome!
This is one of the best uses of 575 I have ever seen. Each stanza is like a layer of emotion and meaning being stripped away, exposing a hard truth underneath.
I will say it again, this is awesome!
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Thank you, I am glad you liked it and the 5-7-5 pattern.