Run run run
Feel strained feet
Breathe breathe breathe
Feel growing heat
Push push push
Sweat cold shiver
Drip drip drop
Wash away the dust
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Run run run
Feel strained feet
Breathe breathe breathe
Feel growing heat
Push push push
Sweat cold shiver
Drip drip drop
Wash away the dust
That’s great!!!
I like the repetition of the words, great rhythm. “feel growing heat.” is a great line.