Poem 1
The Last One
When she was a young mother with a toddler
and an infant, she said that she would make
note of the last washer load of dirty
diapers she washed. As the children grew, she
realized that she could pass that magic
day without noticing it. So she made
a mark on the calendar each time she
washed diapers. The years rushed by and she made
marks on her calendars signifying
the last of milestones like school years and summer
camps and then the days she surrendered her
hopes and dreams to the reality of
aging. Her children flipped through the stack of
calendars in the box in the closet
the day they finished cleaning out her house,
the day after the day they put her in the home.
Wow! Wow! Wow!
This tugged at my heart!
I’m sitting in the hospital watching over my soon to be 95 year old aunt, giving her children a break from that task and your piece sits so poignantly heavy on my heart right now.
Well done. Very well done.
This… a story well told in least amount of words. the picture it paints, that changes too fast… like life.
I loved it, the flow and impact was good. Very well written !^^