My car crashed through the concrete
went falling through the ground
to a deep dark hole filled with broken
rocks and worms slithering around
My car dropped through the concrete
and jolted me inside. I hit the window
with a thud and dared to hold on tight
My car tumbled through the concrete
and when I crawled outside, I saw
the sunset glowing, reflecting in my eyes
Oh my goodness! Such detail drawing us into your experience – and the power of the last line is just wonderful!