Tang
When I kiss you I taste Tang,
the bitter sweetness lighting
up my lips, my tongue. Memories
of an old you play in my mind.
But that you really wasn’t
you. It was him, before
he left and took my heart
with him hundreds of miles.
The Tang on your mouth tastes
like his old cigarettes,
sticky lip-gloss, and music
playing way too loud as wind
brushed hair against our cheeks.
I kiss you and remember
who we were: the best
of friends, lovers meant to be.
Wonderful poem! Yes, the tang of Tang — unforgettable reaction to its effects. The poem captures every bit of that and uses memory to propel it even further. Nice job!