Hour 16

I’m concerned for you,

Your much more than what you portray,

Hershey chocolate skin,

Yes, you are a fine looking man,

Creative mind, bright ideas,

Why must you undermine your intellect?

You don’t have to settle for such imbeciles,

I believe in what you can accomplish,

Despite past transgressions,

What’s important is that you must believe it too,

 

 

2 thoughts on “Hour 16

  1. Such gentle persistence in these lines – a real call to someone to look to himself and believe in the skills he carries within him. This is so carefully phrased – no hectoring or pushiness – but real concern and care. A willingness to see the good in someone and to encourage them to see the same within themselves. Beautiful.

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