Miracle,
a word we speak, our hearts
never included, our minds
never believed, our tongue
never relieved.
Miracle,
a question of faith, our
reasoning never comprehends.
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Miracle,
a word we speak, our hearts
never included, our minds
never believed, our tongue
never relieved.
Miracle,
a question of faith, our
reasoning never comprehends.
I love the line breaks. It made me want to see ‘reasoning’ moved up a line, but that is only because I loved that technique so much.
Aww, thank you, ashaughnessy. I’m so sorry to disappoint you, lol.
Great rhythm! I do agree with ashaughnessy, on the whole makes for a powerful poem. Thank you.