Running almost empty
forgot my password
panicked need to finish
then I remembered it
wrote a poem so quick
so not to forget it
like my energy time is running
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Running almost empty
forgot my password
panicked need to finish
then I remembered it
wrote a poem so quick
so not to forget it
like my energy time is running
Great metaphor for when we stress out and forget to remain calm and all will right itself. I panicked with you and could only send you hope. Great use of ‘in the moment’ to write!
I love the subject, flow and alliteration in this poem. Running on empty is something we can all identify with. Good work!