Hour Six – To Be A Dog in America Mary Pecaut
Summer morning on the couch
in my daughter’s house
Luna Love naps
on my lap. Where does she go
in her sleep? Twitching legs and muffled
belly barks as though racing ‘round
Longfellow Park with Jack or Jake – it seems
on a doggie date. She lives
the good life
even in her dreams.
Very nice that opens like a flower through its three parts (scene/dream/ending). You could have fun building this out between the second and third bits. Run Luna run!