Following up on my early morning Dylan listening, I’ve given myself the prompt to write a poem about a line from any song, choosing a line from “Visions of Johanna.”
I haven’t seen the house I shared
with two housemates I’ve since lost contact.
But, once your bed gets sold out from under
you – and after you painted the walls to grow themselves –
some phone numbers are easier to forget.
That summer, there was always a party.
There were always ants on the kitchen counter.
And I dated a boy who worked as a waiter
who wanted to be a photographer.
After getting off our respective shifts,
we’d meet on the covered porch, through which
the evening breeze blew
and we were lighter than Gatsby and Daisy in the cool night.
I would write stories and he would photograph them
and our certainty was its own redemption
for what other things we said
and can’t remember.
Thoughtful and beautiful. This made me think about when I was in college, living away from home for the first time. I like your narrative approach – it is well balances with the poetic.
Thank you. I’m not sure I’ve done exactly what I wanted with this one, but I have a good start.
I really enjoyed this, it was like travelling through a memory.
You have a very descriptive style of writing and it makes for a very personal feeling poem.
Thank you!