jondelb commented on the post, prompt #12: first or last line (where everything is music) 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Wow… one of my favorites. I’d love to re-read it and put myself in each stanza… Great work.. A must for the anthology!
jondelb commented on the post, Announcing the Finishers of The 24 Hour Poetry Marathon! 6 months, 3 weeks ago
my exact words!
Wow! you gave me chills in my entire body. I was just sharing on the phone abut a poetry class where the instructor talked about writing a poem with a twist. I tried but could never. Then, one of the poems I did Prompt 17, titled the Little Red Box has a twist which I continue to read and I can’t believe the end myself. Yours is the same.. Awesome!!!!
So many times we give a gift
wanting something in return.
But there is a gift I have received
I wonder if you’ve heard.
It is the gift one size fits all
and guess what it is free.
When I need inspiration
he sits with me at night.
Why others can not see him
I just don’t think it’s right.
But he’s my quacky little turtle
who helps me write away.
When I can’t think of […]
I remember many years ago
When I felt God call me to write.
I was leaving the last day of my work
And I could not believe the site.
I found a perfect quill feather
as I labeled it to […]
I am longing for my son
to have peace in his life.
As he is suffering from the loss
of losing his wife.
I hate to see him hurt.
I hate to see him cry
and although we prayed
I still ask […]
Although the darkness surrounds me
as my love’s been taken away.
I must recall all I’ve read
and what the promises did say.
Thy Word is a lamp unto my feet
and a light unto my path.
So for […]
No eye has seen, no ear has heard
what God is truly made of.
But when we stop, look and listen
He’ll explain to us His love.
Oh He’ll reveal the hidden things
when you begin to pr […]
Twas the night before Christmas
and all through St. Joes.
The patients were sleeping
with hall lights aglow.
Medication were given
and rounds were all done.
All patients were […]
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