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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Skay Hour 10 5 months, 3 weeks ago
The leaf as a window to the other side of life.
The leaf as a mirror of life.
The leaf as a call to action.Again, sounds simple but reads deep.
In line 4, comma after window.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Skay Hour 4 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Sounds simple. Reads deep.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, T-Shirts 2020 5 months, 3 weeks ago
I really love these. But I might miss the opportunity. Short timeline.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, I Survived the Poetry Marathon. 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Pretty.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, The Muse (Hour 1) 6 months ago
🙂
Many thanks again.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, The Muse (Hour 1) 6 months ago
Such a detailed feedback! Many thanks, David. I appreciate the insights so much.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Submit to the 2020 Poetry Marathon Anthology 6 months ago
Many thanks again to The Poetry Marathon team for this opportunity. Now, I will be concentrating (in the next 24 hours) on sending my two poems for the anthology.
Special greetings to the editor, Shloka Shankar. I looked at Sonic Boom and downloaded the April 2020 edition (17th issue). I will read it.
To you all poetry marathoners, best…[Read more]
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Poem 1 From Prompt #1 My Mother…My Influence and Sometimes Muse by Ingrid Exner 6 months ago
I love all your poems. They all have sweet simplicity running through them. And simplicity is not a simple art, with less being more.
The strong themes of nature, real living, and the general essence of life makes them a go-to read for uplifting.
My best five are:
Sunrise
My Brand New World
Jumping for Joy-Recipe
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Poem #2 Prompt #2 Jumping For Joy-Recipe by Ingrid Exner 6 months ago
Recipe for Jumping For Joy
[is right here speaking to you]One: Humour
Two: Smile
Three: Child-like Glee
Four: Humility
Five: SunMeasure out three cups of humour
and pour into a large mixing bowl of you.
Add a handful of smiles.
Fold in one cup child-like glee
and mix well to form a paste.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Poem #9 By Ingrid Exner using Prompt #9 "Canoeing, Camping and Fireflies" 6 months ago
This poem enchants, as if it doesn’t. The rhymes amplify it magic even more.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Prompt 10 and Poem 10 "Optimism, Resilience and Dancing with Moonshadows" by Ingrid Exner Half Marathon 2020 6 months ago
In this poem, this dance, there is a celebration of sublime faith. And again, hope!
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Prompt 11 and Poem #11 "My Brand New World" by Ingrid Exner, Half-Marathon, 2020 6 months ago
There is a simplicity here that runs deep. It’s full of love, positivism and hope. This art of words, pieced together for a motivation to live a better life, is a refreshing reminder of what poetry should mostly do! You already know why: “In a world of lesser pain, We would all have chance to gain!”
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Congratulations Poetry Marathoners 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Just to confirm? There won’t be any certificates for Half Marathon finishers?
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, The Muse (Hour 1) 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, The Winners of the 12 Hour Poetry Half Marathon 6 months, 2 weeks ago
What doe “The Winners of the 12 Hour Poetry Half Marathon” mean?
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Season of Recompense (Hour 7) 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks, Amana. I do hope the world responds.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Lockdown in Lagos (Hour 9) 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks, Anne. I feel encouraged after many years of poetry famine.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Auckland (Hour 11) 6 months, 2 weeks ago
I hope so too. Thanks, Siobhan.
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Auckland (Hour 11) 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you. I should read it again. (Smile)
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Ofuma Agali commented on the post, Eye Contact (Hour 12) 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks. Glad you love it. I wasn’t sure how it’d pan out as it was an experiment (first line taken from the last line of a book).
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