@rainiezenith
active 6 months, 2 weeks ago-
rainiezenith commented on the post, Poem 10, Prompt 22 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Cheers 🙂
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rainiezenith commented on the post, hour 2 there is a lot of light that asks me to stay 6 months, 2 weeks ago
How often do sunrises feature in poems, yet you have managed to describe them with beautiful originality, well done.
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rainiezenith commented on the post, Liberation 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Powerful.
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rainiezenith commented on the post, The time before timelessness 6 months, 2 weeks ago
I reckon most people can relate to this!
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rainiezenith commented on the post, The Revolt Poet – A Slither 6 months, 2 weeks ago
This is clever and nuanced. I like it.
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rainiezenith commented on the post, Poem #12, Between the Lines, RedStar 6 months, 2 weeks ago
I love a good bit of synesthesia so thoroughly enjoyed this. The idea of perceiving a stimulus with a sense not usually associated with it is so powerful.
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rainiezenith commented on the post, 2020 – 5 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Love this – imagery and message in a succinct and effective package.
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rainiezenith commented on the post, Half Marathon My Hour 8 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Beautiful imagery. I encourage you to keep writing poetry! 🙂
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rainiezenith commented on the post, Poem 12, Prompt 24 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Cheers Sandy 🙂
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rainiezenith commented on the post, I Know (Hour 4 – 2020) 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Lovely. I hope the person you wrote this about enjoyed it.
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rainiezenith commented on the post, Intimately fond 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Can feel the pain oozing from this, well done.
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rainiezenith commented on the post, Free Verse – A Word I Will Not Say 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Damn, I was waiting for the happy ending!
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rainiezenith commented on the post, Aerophobia 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Love the concept of the exorcism!
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rainiezenith commented on the post, Skay Hour 10 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Came to say this is my favourite, interesting to see it is also someone else’s favourite! And my favourite line? The same one as mentioned above 🙂
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rainiezenith wrote a new post, Poem 12, Prompt 24 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Life, love and liberty
Compose the holy trinitySweet consciousness in all its forms
Delicious passion, care and warmth
Freedom to do and be and morePriceless gifts of pure wonder
Use them well and do not squander -
rainiezenith wrote a new post, Poem 11, Prompt 23 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Arandale Shimmersley Gilbert the Fifth
Was heir to the throne of La Monde
But ruling the world was not what he wished
So Arandale chose to abscondHe fled from the palace at quarter to two
His ambition in […] -
rainiezenith wrote a new post, Poem 10, Prompt 22 6 months, 3 weeks ago
A single feather is all it takes
To tip the scales
And bring royals to their knees
The straw that broke the camel’s back
The drop that made the cup run over
The pea that rendered the princess immeasurable […]-
Very optimistic and inspiring.
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Cheers 🙂
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rainiezenith wrote a new post, Poem 9, Prompt 21 6 months, 3 weeks ago
i want fruition
potential’s a dirty word
gimme gimme now -
rainiezenith wrote a new post, Poem 8, Prompt 20 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Venus has seen us, she’s winking away
She’s watching and smiling, she’s going to stay
Until the night’s climaxed and slipped into day
And left all the bedsheets in stained disarrayVenus has seen us, she’s […]
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rainiezenith wrote a new post, Poem 7, Prompt 19 6 months, 3 weeks ago
blue blue spaghetti tendrils, squidlike, bluebottle, apolemia (apparently)
wide eyes, the thing can see, stingray vision, popeye traversing the ocean
a voyager, a hunter, a predator, a pirate, captain […] - Load More
This is nice. Pretty word use throughout…
Cheers Sandy 🙂
Aww I love this! Short, sweet, simple! Very catchy and gives a home-y type feeling. Also, I really love your comparison of seemingly American values – life, love, liberty – to the Trinity. Very unique! Great job 😊