Your challenge is to write a poem about the topic of marriage, without ever using the word marriage, and while also ideally avoiding the words spouse, husband, and wife.
We started off with promise
a love so deep it conflicted
With every other chiding adult citing
Our relationship as foolish
Tied together by our vows
Fresh faced in unity
Then three long years of foreseen turmoil
Unfortunately even Cassandra could not save us
It started with a spiral
Depression deception doubt
Then desperation death and division
You were not the one I’d held so close
It seemed you never were
And now you’re healing
As am I
But not together sadly
I mourn the unity I fought for
So easily it was rent asunder
And bitter is the mouth that sees you
Finally thriving
Why couldn’t you do that when
it was my life
And you were driving?
I still love you
The you I cannot have
And I doubt you will ever be had.
Nice piece of writing. A compelling story, achingly told. Wistfulness, regret, bubbling anger – you touched a lot of bases. Nice poem.
Thank you