on our place on Old 31 in Franklin,
we had a three compartment garage –
the left side is where Grandpa kept the
old red riding lawn mower that he kept
sharp to keep a beautiful lawn;
it was a Wheel Horse and it’s dank home
smelled of petrol and cold dirt;
He was good with all our equipment,
a smart man who was so quiet you would
never guess he harbored so much knowledge;
He bought the lawnmower very used, but
in his vast brain he just knew inherently how
to fix it. He was smart like that.
Michellia D. Wilson 8/13/2016
good clear fluent words. They flow well and describe so I can see the mower and have a good sense of him.
look at this section again.
he harbored so much knowledge;
He bought the lawnmower very used, but
in his vast brain he just knew inherently how
to fix it. He was smart like that.
I think we knowledge suggests something we learn,and you are talking about talent,an inherent and inborn skill. Was he smart like that in other ways? I’m just more interested in him/
I am so appreciative of your constructive input. I will definitely make corrections. Thank you.