The birds awoke me with their forlorn songs
On this forgotten piece of heaven on earth
My heart throbbed in sync with the sound of deer hoofs beating against the forest ground
Vibrating as it did, awakening as it would
Naked as I was, unclad before nature
I embraced the soil and the solace of loneliness
I love the title and the “solace of loneliness” you write of. This is my favorite line:
“Vibrating as it did, awakening as it would” It’s a nice structure.