No. 11 – My Friend Janey
By Nandhini G. Natarajan
Of fourteen children,
my friend Janey is the twelfth.
Seven older brothers tell her
where to go, what to do.
Janey says yes,
and does what she wants.
She tells me that in college,
I have to party.
Inexperienced,
I completely agree.
I live in a strict dorm.
She tells me to lie
so I can be late.
Her brother Jerry,
the oldest and strictest says,
Do not stay long.
Returning, do not use the deserted fields
as a shortcut.
Janey does both.
I plead and beg,
I have a healthy fear of Jerry.
He is elsewhere, she assures me,
At another party.
We cross the field,
I am sure we will be murdered.
if not by someone in the fields,
definitely by her brother.
Suddenly Janey notices Jerry’s car
On the road, around the fields.
Run, she urges.
We hike our sarees
and run.
Jerry stops where he can
intercept us,
and turns on the high beams.
We can be clearly seen,
but panic-stricken
we continue running
and laughing
hysterically.
The next day, Jerry shows
their family
the pictures he took.
Fortunately, all that is visible
are the four legs
and two sets of teeth
in the dark.
I love this. You tell a whole story with it.
“I have a healthy fear of Jerry.
He is elsewhere, she assures me,
At another party.”
sets up the ending so well! I laughed at that photograph.
This is fantastic! Especially the finale. Great poem.
Oh, how I love this! My lips are threatening to let that twitching smile turn into a laugh. What a slap that poem is! Awesome!
How I loved this!!!!