Gigan Style
First Platoon boards the Huey, sickly smell of sweat and death
elbow to elbow we sit cramped in the narrow compartment
hot, sticky air like a sauna grips us in its wet claws
rotors spin, air rushes through the open doors
but no relief is felt from the hot, breath of the dragon
gnawing fear grips each man as the bird lifts off
taking us to places we don’t want to go
the green canopy is now below us concealing them but not us
we land at the LZ, bullets snapping and popping as we emerge
the encounter is short, bloody, cries of wounded, silence of dead
First Platoon boards the Huey, sickly smell of sweat and death
gnawing fear grips each man as the bird lifts off
are we headed back to the firebase, home, safety from the enemy
safety from the fear and death and sweat
Hueys flying the wrong way, new orders issued
on to the next hot LZ more fear, death and sweat
You really gave this a visceral feel, and I’m really growing to like the gigan form. Thank you for writing it!
THank you. Glad you liked this piece. I had never written in the gigan style till this prompt. I like the style myself.