Honduras’ hot sauce
nor
Budapest’s boat ride
nor
my inventions
nor
steps backward
nor
silence in empty spaces
hair folded over
steamed pores
wine over tongue
Vinegar and poison
flesh burning
hair smouldering
ears filled with noise
nor
this
nor
that
nor
barefoot
nor
naked
nor
nothing.
Philip V. Coombs 6-7pm
This is wonderful. You use short lines to such great effect here, and the repetition of the word nor, and how you employ it is very well done.