It is said all they found
was his blue windbreaker
hanging on a tree
a bloody fingernail lodged in its pocket.
They searched for
his axe, his shoes,
drag marks and
tire tracks
and abandoned shacks –
all dead ends.
He had simply disappeared
like morning dew in noon.
His vanishing became a bar story
fodder at camp sites
and night time tales
the story became a legend
legend became a myth
and myth became a fear so potent
that anyone who passed
the woods in the night
swore to have heard screams
and nine fingernails
scratching barks of
the very trees that
seemed to have swallowed
Mr. Hickinbottom.
This is awesome! Very Dickensian and I could feel the hairs rising on the back of my neck as I read it! Classic!
The use of language creates a nice tempo, and I wonder whatever did happen to Mr. Hickenbottom?
The realty of a disappearance, and the legend around it, affects people in different ways, well represented in this poem.