“I came to explore the wreck. The words are purposes. The words are maps.” – Adrienne Rich
she and i
were frightened to come but we came
i only know what my body whispers to
me and she says to explore
the forgotten places the
caverns the death the ships that wreck
i only know what my heart sings the
feelings that she sculpts into words
the loves that are
eternal renewing with purposes
i only know what my brain screams at me the
terror she stitches into words
you are stronger than you think you are
a body’s pulse churning pulsing out the maps
I liked the way you used your line words. The poem you made around them is really good.
thank you so much!
I had a hard time with this form, but you really captured it. Your poem doesn’t feel distinct or separate from the Rich lines, but somehow related to the framework of those original ideas. Great work!