Original lines taken from Take This Longing by Leonard Cohen:
…your beauty lost to you, yourself,
just as it was lost to them –
take this longing from my tongue
all the useless things my hands have done
let me see your beauty broken down
like you would do
for one you love.
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broken beauty
What did they do to your
confidence that you don’t see your beauty
behind the pieces of you lost
to time, to happiness to
pieces of you
you wouldn’t see in yourself.
If I could just
love you enough as
to hold a mirror for you to see yourself in it,
I wonder if it was,
or would be time lost
for me to
find them
and take
them a painting of this
holy mess they’ve been longing
to claim from
what they have stolen from my
heart, my soul, my tongue.
Like you, once and for all,
I need the
voices to stop telling me I’m useless
with these things
tangled in my
heart in my hands.
I need to have
peace in what I have done.
Even when you have my blood to let,
you see me
let me see
you and all of your
broken beauty –
soul held down
with kisses like
everything you said you
loved or would
love if we could do
what we needed for
ourselves just one
time if you
let me give you love.
R. L. Elke
© Aug 5/17 prompt 8