How could I be so ridiculous
To think that life is so damn bad
No where is it etched in stone
That life is made of gold
It can be cold
But I know
It’s good
Though.
Rebelí
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
How could I be so ridiculous
To think that life is so damn bad
No where is it etched in stone
That life is made of gold
It can be cold
But I know
It’s good
Though.
Rebelí
Just add one more line with 5 syllables, and you will have a great nonet! Wisdom in descending syllables.
Good job!
Thank you!
Thank you so much for the feedback this was my first time writing something like this LOL 😁🙏🏽