When I was young
I would hide
Submerge myself fully underwater
Eyes closed
Only my gentle exhale keeps me company
A secret joy
In knowing
I am sequestered from the world
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
When I was young
I would hide
Submerge myself fully underwater
Eyes closed
Only my gentle exhale keeps me company
A secret joy
In knowing
I am sequestered from the world
Excellent use of tempo. I felt like I was underwater…waiting for the last line.
Thank you Sarah!
That was exactly the feeling I was trying to convey, glad it came through!
Thanks for reading!