Early finishers
late starters
each will find
Radiant day
In the space
We all are floating
Waiting a place
To sit and watch the space
View from below is distorted
Without space….
the stars would have
nowhere to shine,
the earth and the moon would
no longer dance
the sky would no longer hold
the clouds in its embrace
and you would have
no room to move
What magic is in the space
Its landscape is huge
Far more than we all can fill
we all are like
overlapping petals
of different flowers;
Spreading energy
Reaching everyone
across vast space;
caressing and strengthning
Our resolve
and complete
Our circle of poetry!
This is full of positivity! I enjoyed reading it. My favorite lines were-caressing and strengthening
Our resolve
and complete
Our circle of poetry! I loved stanza 2. Keep writing 🙂
Thanks Ruchi for your kind words 😊
Great words here. A journey floating in space. I like the flow of this.
Thanks Joyce !! 💗
THe moon and the sun dance in space. You say you write to a express and affirm emotions an dthis one certainly does that well. What a joyful image of the cosmos!
Thanks Paul!! That’s very kind of you . Glad you like it too .
I guess this one would go for submition as I received the most comments 😋