(a tanka) Posted on June 22, 2019 11:09am EDT by sheilas that old Slinky toy descending the stairs of my memory its mechanical agency as urgent as ever
Hope you wrote that dream down! This tanka was my response to the ‘magic’ prompt. I thought the Slinky was pretty magical when I was a kid. Reply
took me right back to childhood. i’ve been reading through your posts including older ones – you have areal knack for the tanka. Reply
I love this!
So powerful! Jacob read it to me yesterday and then I had a dream about it.
Hope you wrote that dream down! This tanka was my response to the ‘magic’ prompt. I thought the Slinky was pretty magical when I was a kid.
Oh this is so unique and memorable! I love this one!
took me right back to childhood. i’ve been reading through your posts including older ones – you have areal knack for the tanka.