the wolf spider
runs along the rim
of my computer screen
too fast to catch
I wish things had
ended differently
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
the wolf spider
runs along the rim
of my computer screen
too fast to catch
I wish things had
ended differently
I like this one, Sheila.
Had to look up cherita again. 1/2/3 lines hmmm. They say it can be a collaboration like a rengay.
Thanks, John. I also need to review what people are doing with it. I think people have played with the order. I’m thinking of moving Line 4 up to the 2nd stanza, so it would be 1-3-2. It’s nice to have such a short narrative form available.