Eternity’s Eye

Sitting upon this knoll, I am awe-struck;
How fleeting our days float by.
To eternity’s eye, a lifetime is merely a
lonely breath, a single raindrop
meandering through the clouds, a snail
pacing its time until darkness closes;                                            miraculous, life finds its time up.

Yosa Busin haiku

One thought on “Eternity’s Eye

  1. Beautiful poem. I love some of your words choices here: “eternity’s eye,” “a single raindrop meandering,” “a snail pacing its time”… Well crafted. One typo I noticed: I think you mean “breath” not “breathe”. 🙂

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