fresh fading sun rays
ribboning the sky; moonrise
peeking o’er the hill
starshine restlessly
waits nightfall’s velvet veil; ah!
What stirs my soul’s joy?
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
fresh fading sun rays
ribboning the sky; moonrise
peeking o’er the hill
starshine restlessly
waits nightfall’s velvet veil; ah!
What stirs my soul’s joy?
I like the line breaks, especially in the first stanza/second line and how they creates a unique path for the reader.