I’m looking down at the
pretty yellow cabanas
all in a row
like students in the classroom
eyes forward facing the
sun drenched gleaming water
The cabanas look
more like umbrellas of a
single monotonous color
standing at attention
like good military soldiers.
I prefer the international umbrellas,
the multi colored ones
that I saw at the lavender festival
last week.
They were much more vivid
set against the constant blue of sky.
I’m looking up at the
pretty colored umbrellas
and lost where
mysteries abound
in the chaos
of multi anything
Lovely imagery—it makes the reader feel present in the scene.
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I love the visual details and similes used in this poem, and the ending… full of wonder!
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