I hear him roar
in the skies outside,
the rain dances a beat
and I know this is it.
In the skies outside
the lightening lights up,
and I know this it,
this is where it ends.
The lightening lights up
the darkened skies.
This is where it ends,
With the trumpets blaring.
The darkened skies
Awaken the slumber
with the trumpets blaring
and with a swirling of winds.
“Awaken the slumber!”
I hear him roar.
And with a swirling of winds,
the reign dances a beat.
Nice! I wanted to try a pantoum myself, but couldn’t manage it this time. You use the repetition neatly, keeping the lines fresh. The overall image is striking and, because of the first-person perspective, it feels like being there. Glimpses of something devastating.