2 thoughts on “Disneyland Holiday Vacation 2020

  1. Wow, have you caught the gist of the Disneyland vacation! This poem works so well because of its controlled language; each short line creates a complete image and they all pile one on top of the other until I get to the really strongly rhymed final four lines. Isn’t it weird and sad how we’ve now come to fear crowds? This expresses that overwhelming sense of wariness completely!

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