Again I have need to haunt this pen
for again you have forgotten my words
and have ceded your power to another
I see this hold she still has over you
but I do not know how to rationalize it
You have retuned to following the rules
of one who never truly saw you
I do not know how else to tell you
that you deserve to be more
than her proof that she is a good person
This hold she has over you
was solely her way of controlling you
But to perpetuate her voice in your head
will only cause you distress
I think, personally, AND as your editor 😛
this needs either punctuation or punchier formatting. I really enjoy the content though and can’t wait to see how this gets polished up or used in various projects