Life’s a Noodle Soup
In the hearth stove
the filigree takes shape
noodles mixed with spices
entangled in coiled knots
struggling to be free
only a wafting smell escapes
Alas..if not such entanglement, what is life?
Hour 16
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Life’s a Noodle Soup
In the hearth stove
the filigree takes shape
noodles mixed with spices
entangled in coiled knots
struggling to be free
only a wafting smell escapes
Alas..if not such entanglement, what is life?
Hour 16
Agreed! I love the theme and especially the last line- “what is life if not such entanglement?”. Relatable and very fitting description. Well-written! ^^
Many Thanks