I see the first line SMILE. Clever! 🙂 Unfortunately, as a poem, it has too much meaning lost between each line to make it coherent. One more syllable and it could be a haiku. Perhaps you could change the L and E to different words that hint or point to the laugh/smile intention?
I see the first line SMILE. Clever! 🙂 Unfortunately, as a poem, it has too much meaning lost between each line to make it coherent. One more syllable and it could be a haiku. Perhaps you could change the L and E to different words that hint or point to the laugh/smile intention?