Returning
Longing solitude
overlooks the borderlines
ready to swim back
Hour 9
@varenyas
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Love these short forms – only they are so loaded with concept! I love the use of “borderlines,” which I wouldn’t have seen that way myself. And the idea of ‘swimming back’ to some place, whereas others might be more inclined to want to head toward ‘civilization.’ There is an otherworldliness to this – a kind of sci-fi feeling. Nicely imagined.
Love these short forms – only they are so loaded with concept! I love the use of “borderlines,” which I wouldn’t have seen that way myself. And the idea of ‘swimming back’ to some place, whereas others might be more inclined to want to head toward ‘civilization.’ There is an otherworldliness to this – a kind of sci-fi feeling. Nicely imagined.